Wednesday, April 13, 2011

HW 45 - Reply to Other Peoples' Comments

My response to Matts comment:

Thanks Matt, and I completely agree with your comment about me focusing on single mothers more. When I did this blog I sort of lost tract on what I was talking about, and didn't have one main idea, because i had a few. This whole unit alone is pretty interesting to me, so i tried to cram as many things that i researched into it. Thanks so much for reading my blog, and be on the look out for more to come.

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My response to Javons comment:

Thanks Javon, you're right about that part of my blog not elaborating more about what i meant about men today lacking responsibility, and i regret that, like i told Matt I tried to cram a lot of information and my thoughts in my blog, but I also rushed it a bit. I appreciate your feedback, and have taken it to mind, and will apply your tips to my next blog. Thanks again, and I hope you read my next blog.

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My response to Jessicas comment:

Thanks Jessica, as I can see everyone who's read my blog wants me to give more personal examples on my blog. you got it. I'll elaborate more on the examples i give, because I admit that i didn't give enough detail which is a crucial part in any paper. Thanks so much for reading my blog, and I hope you read my future blogs to come.

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My response to Deans comment:

Thanks Dean, I'm glad you enjoyed my blog, and found parts of it to be interesting. Since you have such a positive comment, I hope you'll read my next blog, also if you have any feedback on what you'd like to see on my next blog that i didn't put on this one, let me know. Thanks again, and stay posted for more blogs to come.

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My response to Stephens comment:

Thanks Stephen, I re-read my blog after i had done it and thought the same thing as your feedback, but was figured "eh, it's late it's not too off topic, where it'll throw a reader off, so f-it". But trust me my next blog, i'll be on point throughout the whole thing, but I hope you read my next blog, and tell me what you think about that one to come. Thanks again for reading my blog.

1 comment:

  1. Rigel,
    My goal for my blog post and speech was to explain more about the doctors that help mothers give birth. After reading your comment I think I succeed at doing such. I definitely agree with you that my blog post should have been longer. I needed to expand my ideas and go into more depth with my answers. Since your blog had such interesting information on it, I will be sure to read it more often.

    Dean

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