My response to Matts comment:
Thanks Matt, and I completely agree with your comment about me focusing on single mothers more. When I did this blog I sort of lost tract on what I was talking about, and didn't have one main idea, because i had a few. This whole unit alone is pretty interesting to me, so i tried to cram as many things that i researched into it. Thanks so much for reading my blog, and be on the look out for more to come.
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My response to Javons comment:
Thanks Javon, you're right about that part of my blog not elaborating more about what i meant about men today lacking responsibility, and i regret that, like i told Matt I tried to cram a lot of information and my thoughts in my blog, but I also rushed it a bit. I appreciate your feedback, and have taken it to mind, and will apply your tips to my next blog. Thanks again, and I hope you read my next blog.
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My response to Jessicas comment:
Thanks Jessica, as I can see everyone who's read my blog wants me to give more personal examples on my blog. you got it. I'll elaborate more on the examples i give, because I admit that i didn't give enough detail which is a crucial part in any paper. Thanks so much for reading my blog, and I hope you read my future blogs to come.
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My response to Deans comment:
Thanks Dean, I'm glad you enjoyed my blog, and found parts of it to be interesting. Since you have such a positive comment, I hope you'll read my next blog, also if you have any feedback on what you'd like to see on my next blog that i didn't put on this one, let me know. Thanks again, and stay posted for more blogs to come.
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My response to Stephens comment:
Thanks Stephen, I re-read my blog after i had done it and thought the same thing as your feedback, but was figured "eh, it's late it's not too off topic, where it'll throw a reader off, so f-it". But trust me my next blog, i'll be on point throughout the whole thing, but I hope you read my next blog, and tell me what you think about that one to come. Thanks again for reading my blog.
Rigel,
ReplyDeleteMy goal for my blog post and speech was to explain more about the doctors that help mothers give birth. After reading your comment I think I succeed at doing such. I definitely agree with you that my blog post should have been longer. I needed to expand my ideas and go into more depth with my answers. Since your blog had such interesting information on it, I will be sure to read it more often.
Dean